Peer Review #1: avajayne.com

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The homepage of avajayne.com.

Hi, Ava. I am writing to you to assess your website, avajayne.com. At first glance, I see that you haven’t done any intensive editing on your homepage yet. Your content is still unpublished or inaccessible as well. I’m using your website description in the PUB101 Google Drive document to contextualize my feedback for your website.

The template you chose is decent, although depending on what type of content you are doing, I would choose something with simpler elements. This template appears more suited towards a business or event hosting. I would suggest deleting all the blocks on the homepage and Strat from something super simple. It would not only help get your website presentable much faster, but having a dry background would make your photos pop better. Consider how these websites style their photo galleries:

https://oliviamcewanhill.com

https://60wrdmin.org/section/97524.html

Aside from this I don’t have much feedback to offer, as the only signs of your authorship I can find is the website name in the top-left and the navigation menu. None of the links in the navigation menu work, so if you have completed other pages on the site, I haven’t been able to access it.

Good luck, Ava! WordPress is difficult to get a handle of, but once you get all the main elements up and running, things will hopefully start coming together! I look forward to seeing your website thrive!

— Ivar

Link to Ava’s website.

https://avajayne.com/

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